Hi Rebecca! I really liked your idea of the butterfly to represent the change in mood during your poem. I think it was a good idea to have the quotes on the sides of your butterfly to have textual evidence visible to the viewer without them reading the poem. I also liked how you interweaved your textual evidence inside your tags and included an interpretation, although I think you were a little repetitive in the dark side of the butterfly. I noticed you repeated, " "Death wields and icy scythe," plethora of times to support certain moods or tones. Is there another piece of the poem that can support imagery, figuritve language, or mood other than "dearh wields and icy scythe?"
Also, is the colors you picked for your butterfly based off of the actual colors interpretation, or is it based off of what you connect it to?
I like how you showed that the poem goes from positive tone into a negative tone by showing darker colors for the negative ton and brighter colors for the positive. I also like how you showed quotes from your poem next to your visual connection. The one recommendation I have is putting the poem so I can see where the mood of the poem goes from positive to negative. Otherwise I was really intrested in your butterfly, Great Job.
I really like your butterfly because it looks like you put a lot of work into it. I think that it was a good idea to split the butterfly in half to show the two different sides of your poem. The silhouettes were a creative idea that you had and I think that they worked out really well with your poem. I noticed that your butterfly was really thorough since you had over fourteen tags. The only things I noticed was that you were missing your MLA citation, a link to your poem, and only a few spelling errors such as where you wrote "bout" in the top let black tag. I think that other than those things, you did a really good job.
Just from looking at your butterfly you can see there was a lot of effort put into it, great job! I really liked how you split your butterfly in half to show the two different moods of your poem. You did a great job on your tags explaining what each thing symbolizes. From your tags you can really tell that you annotated your poem really well (also because you had fourteen tags). My only recommendation is to include your poem so the reader can understand the different moods of your poem. Overall, really good job!
Looking at your butterfly you can see you worked hard on it and it looks like it took a long time so nice job. Overall your butterfly is nice and colorful. I liked how one side of the butterfly was dark and gloomy while the other side was bright and this helped show the juxtaposition between both sides. Your tags were really good and clear and I liked how you added more than needed and it shows how you are really trying. However one things that you are laking is your poem so you should add your poem that way we can see your thought process more on why you added certain things. Overall nice job.
Looking at your butterfly I can see that you put a lot of thought into this. I really like how the silhouettes are different on each side. I also like how you used brighter, happier colors on the good side, and dark, more sad colors on the bad side. Another thing I liked you did was added more tags. This shows that you really had a good understanding of your poem, and were able to explain it well. One thing you could add is your poem, so we could go back and see where the information is being taken from. Overall great job!
Hi Rebecca! I really liked your idea of the butterfly to represent the change in mood during your poem. I think it was a good idea to have the quotes on the sides of your butterfly to have textual evidence visible to the viewer without them reading the poem. I also liked how you interweaved your textual evidence inside your tags and included an interpretation, although I think you were a little repetitive in the dark side of the butterfly. I noticed you repeated, " "Death wields and icy scythe," plethora of times to support certain moods or tones. Is there another piece of the poem that can support imagery, figuritve language, or mood other than "dearh wields and icy scythe?"
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I like how you showed that the poem goes from positive tone into a negative tone by showing darker colors for the negative ton and brighter colors for the positive. I also like how you showed quotes from your poem next to your visual connection. The one recommendation I have is putting the poem so I can see where the mood of the poem goes from positive to negative. Otherwise I was really intrested in your butterfly, Great Job.
ReplyDeleteI really like your butterfly because it looks like you put a lot of work into it. I think that it was a good idea to split the butterfly in half to show the two different sides of your poem. The silhouettes were a creative idea that you had and I think that they worked out really well with your poem. I noticed that your butterfly was really thorough since you had over fourteen tags. The only things I noticed was that you were missing your MLA citation, a link to your poem, and only a few spelling errors such as where you wrote "bout" in the top let black tag. I think that other than those things, you did a really good job.
ReplyDeleteJust from looking at your butterfly you can see there was a lot of effort put into it, great job! I really liked how you split your butterfly in half to show the two different moods of your poem. You did a great job on your tags explaining what each thing symbolizes. From your tags you can really tell that you annotated your poem really well (also because you had fourteen tags). My only recommendation is to include your poem so the reader can understand the different moods of your poem. Overall, really good job!
ReplyDeleteLooking at your butterfly you can see you worked hard on it and it looks like it took a long time so nice job. Overall your butterfly is nice and colorful. I liked how one side of the butterfly was dark and gloomy while the other side was bright and this helped show the juxtaposition between both sides. Your tags were really good and clear and I liked how you added more than needed and it shows how you are really trying. However one things that you are laking is your poem so you should add your poem that way we can see your thought process more on why you added certain things. Overall nice job.
ReplyDeleteLooking at your butterfly I can see that you put a lot of thought into this. I really like how the silhouettes are different on each side. I also like how you used brighter, happier colors on the good side, and dark, more sad colors on the bad side. Another thing I liked you did was added more tags. This shows that you really had a good understanding of your poem, and were able to explain it well. One thing you could add is your poem, so we could go back and see where the information is being taken from. Overall great job!
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